My focal point is the bird, plant, and the mini tree.
Where is the leading line?
The leading line is in the middle leading to the mini tree, plant and the bird.
What can I improve in my artwork?
I think I have to much focal point next time I should stick to 1 or 2 focal points.
Kia ora Nini
ReplyDeleteShort and sweet and nothing wrong with that in your post!
I agree, I think you need to knock back a bit of what is not your focal point to enhance what is.
In saying that, the blue works really well as a leading line/shape as does the pattern at the top, because it is the same kind of green tone as the plants/garden down the bottom. This helps create unity in your work.
You have focussed and worked really well in class and what you have made has meant you have learned lot sand you have something to use in our magazine layout that will be successful, in term two. Good job :-)